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Wife's First Swallow

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by louienohio08/07/06

"Thanks to the officer?"

Come on, this should be in the nonconsent category. Rape of teenage children by police officers, you know, that's still the most common claim in public insurance.
Anyway, IMO, you can't write. Your grammar's full of holes, your plot's as old as law enforcement, there's not a line of development about your main female child beyond that she's mixed. The only way this could have been worse is if you used 'nubonics' in the dialogue, and even there you came pretty close.

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by Anonymous08/19/06

Dont listen to all the critics

Not a bad story, I personally dont read stories on this website for a grammer lesson. Louie n' Ohio is bored because he lives in Ohio. Keep up the great stories and send me a nude pic of that hot ass wife you have.

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by Anonymous12/05/07

rape? yeh real erotic asshole!

Dude no-one can blackmail a kid for staying out late particularly not a cop! Dude how can anyone get turned on by this it's rape pure and simple. If there are more people out there like you then I wonder why there arn't more arrests of power weilding cunts who think that rape is somthing to be turned on about. Also if this story is true then can your wife please report this? I know it may not get anywhere but if it means that she can help a young girl from being forced into a situation she doesn't like then it'll be worth any effort she can give

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by Anonymous12/05/07

Don't give up the day job

Even a tenuous link to real life possibilities can work wonders in a story. This one stank. It's just so far out of its box, it didn't bear reading. And I didn't care for the (needless) reference to colour. WTF was THAT about ?

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by Anonymous01/17/08

Lucky me

Lucky to have found this hot story. Real or not, it turned me on. Why else do we write and read these stories? How else do we judge them? These won't be getting Pulitzers any time soon. I could imagine myself in that position....and loving it.

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by Anonymous05/05/09

Master Of Blowjobs

I recently made my wife swallow, also my friend master of blowjobs.

It felt oh so wonderful

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by Anonymous07/10/09

her first swallow

Great story, I'm always interested in reading stories about girls swallowing cum for the first time. It's always great to introduce a new woman to the world of cum swallowing. For some of them, once they pop they don't stop. I like to compile stories and experiences of first time swallowers on my site: 1st time swallowing

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by Anonymous02/04/12

You made me cum too ! :-)

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by Anonymous11/07/13

Well

Your wife is a whore

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