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Highschool Sucks, Hard Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/08/06

love it!

love both chapters! please write more! i love the character development making the whole story more rounded...(and very hot!)

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by Anonymous08/08/06

B

Story development has improved from chapter one. However, still contains numerous grammatical errors.

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by WomanWorshiper08/09/06

Keep writing!

Your character and story development are taking shape nicely. It's so refreshing to read a story where the emotion of love leads so naturally into the passion of making love. Keep it up!

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by Anonymous08/12/06

great story

nicely written, believable, funny and sweet. i cant wait for the next chapter.

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by Anonymous05/21/14

Charming read

It's nice when a story isn't just hard erotica but also has a normal human element.

This one was adorable, I especially like the bit where she smooshes his face and says "whose a smart boy." XD

Felt like a real recounting of young love but with plenty of sexy bits to satisfy too.

Both chapters were lovely, would love to see it continued. Keep writing. :)

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