All Comments on 'Spilt Sounds'

Short, and very, very sweet!

Normally I don't like very short stories - it seems like they meet in sentence one, are in bed by sentence four and paragraphs 2 and 3 detail their "hot" sex.

But this was very well done!

There was no doubt in the readers mind that the author had put you in the exact spot where they were and was able to lead the reader there quickly enough to make it an enjoyable journey.

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Mmmmm....

That did not describe anything sexual what soever

Short and sweet