by sr71plt
At first I couldn't figure out how this story was so different from the others that I have read...then it hit me - there was no dialogue! This does not detract from the story at all. In fact, in some ways, it makes it flow more smoothly. Oh, and I loved the canine vs. feline theme. A fun read!
I think some dialogue could have punctuated the keypoints however. Good luck in the contest!
Are Natalie's loins pure? Did she like it when the catgirl purred into her loins?