by heatherc502
Good start- I gave it 100 for great girl girl action; try and put more raunchy details in the sex scenes- thats what your readers are searching for
It was over to quickly! enjoyed what was there but more would be good.Chapter 2 ?
sounds delcious. i've had the experience and turned full lesbian from it. my and my girl are still together 20 years on :3
Reading this story as a straight fEmale made me sooooo horney and I have dEcidEd I have to expereince the soft Erotic wet pussy of another woman ahhhhh I can't wait soooooo dripping just thinkig abot it ahhHhhhh
Mmm I fingering my wet pussy now. That got me so hot and wet. I need someone to lick this cum up. ;)
Oh how I would have loved to be her!!!! My pussy is SO hot & wet just reading that and visualizing every motion, every lick....mmmmmmm sooo hot!!!!
My pussy is so wet. Reading this makes me so hot. I want someone to lick my puss and make me cum!
Im Sooooo Wet Right Now, Im Fingering Myself, I Just Need Someone To Lick Up All My Cum. My Pussy Feels So Good. I Just Really Need A Tongue Or Dick Inside Me.!!!!
I am dripping wet after that I really need a dick to come for me after that
Could this have been written by a woman? I don't think so. It's badly-composed and sloppy. A waste of time!
Heterosexual or not, this gal must've watched a lot of lesbian porn to have so easily being enraptured by a true honey of a lesbian. Hey man, gals are the best at making real love with another girl, something men has to work hard on one to not being the joke of women gossiping around the water fountain. Nice imagination and experience as a guide in writing such a hot story.