All Comments on 'motel ceilings'

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Quite an image here

Of exploring love in all the wrong places

With a view of varied motel ceilings.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
An old familiar love...

Reflections and thoughts of loves he has known and enjoyed as morning comes and he is ~ on his way.

Maria2394Maria2394over 17 years ago
the title is intriguing..

the poem is even better.

Normally I find such short lines ineffective, but they work wonderfully here.

good work!!

maria

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