All Comments on 'Adam & Steve, Eve's Fall'

Sev

You started then dropped this story for years. Why? I don't know, but it the makings of a story so parallel to mine own that, I'm desperately curious as to what the next chapter may hold. I'll email you the details of My story. I implore you to continue this one. It has character development in the infant stages. This could go 20 chapters if written like you are writing it now. Don't stop. I read alot of your work, and I am always impressed.

Keep it up,

Michael in Corvallis OR USA

It had quite a few grammatical and punctuation errors. Hopefully the other stories you have written have been corrected

So far I have really enjoyed this story! I like how he is "rescuing" adam from his evil wife, but still plans on "using" him a little. It appears that Steve will be a lover to Adam, and not a raper.

Please do write the next chapter soon!!!

Where is the rest? I want to know how they get even with Eva. Please describe your characters it helps with telling the story. Are you planning to finish the story?

What a refreshing change from the usual dominant crap. Keep it up!