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Within Me~Heart & Soul

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by LeBroz12/24/06

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A cold, hard-edged feel to this piece,
Dissecting and discussing apathy.

An interesting observation ~ was it apathy that let the contraction "whats" be used several times without inserting the apostrophe ~ as in "what's" ?

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