All Comments on 'The Family Slave'

Great story!

Totally unbelievable and sounds like it must have been a bunch of hillbillies... really and truly a pathetic excuse for a story.

Spelling? 4th graders have a better command of "their, there and they're"

Puncuation? Have you never heard of a thing called a comma?

Sentence structure? The hell with it, I can't begin to explain something you should have learned by 5h grade.

Now, go to the blackboard and write,

"Huked on fonics werked four me",

400 times.

Your edjumakayshun really sucked.

This is illiterate crap written by an uneducated moron.

Steve L.

Ever heard of spell check or grammar check? They are on every word processing program out there. USE IT!

I loved it made me so horny cant wait for the rest

Very bad please give me a break . . .

faggot shit

go back to first grade English dumbass. ever heard of a comma?

I thought Link broke both his arms, and so couldn't masturbate?

So... how is he holding her arms?

Your off to a good start don't stop now!!!

Clearly your own dream except with a 2 inch tool.