All Comments on 'Perhaps Vanilla'

by MungoParkIII

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Some spice extracts to hint at other possibilities.

unapologeticunapologeticover 17 years ago
"the chocolate possibility hovering"

The juxtaposition of words one doesn't normally see together was my favorite part.

unapologeticunapologeticover 17 years ago
"the chocolate possibility hovering"

The juxtaposition of words one doesn't normally see together was my favorite part.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Tender

A sweet and tender love poem. I love the flavors and textures in the poem, creates effective images in the readers' mind.

An enjoyable read

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
advancing.

Striving for erotic consumation ~ perhaps...perhaps.

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 17 years ago
Sweet...

and so yummy that the tongue comes alive and begs for more..

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