All Comments on '"In time..."'

The Queen of illustrated poetry returns; that image could easily be from or near a rocky outcropping in a desert; it serves to build the anticipation to the poem's end.

Once parted from each other ~ time changes everything.

Here is my problem with illustrated poetry as such. I want it to be more. I want the Illustration to be more than decoration, but to be a modifier; an equal partner, a challenger from a different dimension to the text which will create a much more complex interpretative challenge. The time of the reading of the text; the space of the picture; the imagined time and space created by the text- all interplaying.

I liked this poem but did find that the visual element added much to it. Certainly did not shift or interact with meanings.

A lesson in why we should never keep our clocks fast. Otherwide we will meet our Maker early.

A very apt "Illustration"

Great work - thanks.

and gives a lot to think about...

in the end

stretched beyond stretching

sometimes

something

snaps

this poem of yours speaks to me, lauren. has me waiting to feel the vibrations of that silent scream

Expression of a stark sadness, a musing on time's tyranny. Brilliant.

I don't know why this is on Literotica ( or maybe I didn't get the sexual link), but an amazing poem! Truly loved it.

and falling trees. TK U MLJ LV NV ps no stars available