All Comments on 'Three hours earlier'

by Salvor-Hardon

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NirvanadragonesNirvanadragonesabout 17 years ago
Very sexy

Thank you for writing it . . . sexy image, smooth, sensual poem.

*kiss*

cloudycloudyabout 17 years ago
Nice image

I like the image of the jeans as easily taken off again. Very nice.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Standing there, savoring the moment of recollection, not quite ready to end it. For just a moment more, let the rest of the day wait.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

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ABSTRUSEABSTRUSEabout 17 years ago
Sigh

I can picture this in my mind so easily. Beautiful imagery.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
3 hours later, after-poem

This is a very good erotic piece, Sal. It's a streamlined sensual image. Enjoyed much, thank you.

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
After...

Getting dressed after the event can be just as sexy sometimes.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
What..

a beautiful image your words paint...

RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyabout 17 years ago
Very nice

The subtlety of erotica is a woman or a man in the stages of getting dressed. A hint of what lies beneath making a person wonder. . .are they dressing for danger or covering up their sin. . . Lovely work. ~ Red.

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