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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
You created...

quite a story that was filled with striking images but doused with sadness. I enjoyed the read, but pray tell, does it depict anyone 'famous' or special?

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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A poignant feel to this. It seems a bit long for a prose poem but too short for a short story. The sort of story that need be read more than once to better feel it.

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Hi. I'm M but I go by many names. LasciviousSanity around these parts. The only thing useful to know about me is that I love to write. At home, school, in the bathroom, or in a bar. Near or far. Up or down, I write all over town.

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