All Comments on 'Not the Script She Was Expecting'

Expanding your repertoire, I see. The old, romantic softie did creep in at the end.

Boyd

I loved it! Related to it, except I did not receive the love. But the "sesions" we share are hhmm WOW

Thought you're not into children's book? This is a freaking fairy tale!

I read the forewarning and I must say I'm surprised by how touching the romantic part of this was. I was expecting less and got more. It was wonderful.

I read the beginning and honestly, there was only maybe one or two words that I missed...

This was a really awesome one!

And to whoever down there said this was like a children's book,

I would like to say,

WHAT?

Don't take personally the comment about smaller words... just keep on doing what you are doing! Good story.

She has a ball gag in her mouth, how is she begging him to do her ass? You need to explain the gag removal before putting in all the dialog. IMHO. Kind of a quick transition from B&D freak to vanilla sex, but I think you sold it. Makes a good story.

Don't listen to whoever said your words aren't right. You are a very gifted writer, and I very much enjoyed reading your stroy. Keep it up!

I loved this! The right mix of force, passion, and real people interactions. I don't know what that person is talking about - your writing is perfectly understandable and well-crafted to boot. Great Job!

and absolutely everything you want and more in a bdsm story. Even a bit of romance. Nice -- very, very exquisitely nice.

English is not my first language so forgive me for any mistakes:

This was one of the best stories I've read! Have you thougth about getting your work published?

I actually really enjoyed how you wrote this, so to whomever told you to use simpler words I say: a non native speaker can understand this, shame on you. You may want to try 50 shades if this was too hard for you.