by noplex
Looking forward to more of this developing relationship and the story's possibilites.
I read ch2 than went back and read ch1..Very good storyline
and well written.. I'll be waiting for more chapters!!!!
I'm not into sci-fi but I still think you did a very good
job on this story..
Please write more this is a very meaningful story. Just as a btw, i thnk u mite be more successful if u implied things and let the reader make there own conclusions about some of the plot details. That way u can clear out any misconcepions if u need to in a later chapter, but can also leave us a bit of freedom with out imagination. I only wish i could write lyk u. Keep going
is like using a seive to measure HOH. TK U MLJ LV NV