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Eye for an Eye Ch. 3

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/30/07

Nice addition...

but i think that she went too fast what with her past and all...

overall i would saw a 8/10 for this submission...looking forward to more chapters soon...as well as in your other stories...

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by Anonymous05/03/07

Love it...

Very nice,
I absolutely enjoy reading what you created, be it this story
or the others.

Thought I have to second the previous comment, she did come about a *bit* fast - but then, two month is a lot of time where you wouldn;t just write crap to make it feel long for us...

I absolutly like his attitude, please continue,
I'll be allways eager to check back for new content by you;
Cheers
Killerdog

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by Anonymous05/08/07

I love it

I really love this story. I cant wait till you post again so that i can read what happens next. Please continue soon.

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by Anonymous09/01/07

I really like the way that...

you've put a lot of detail into the background of Dave. I thought that you have done a very good job of setting up this story and I think that it shows a lot of promise for future chapters. Maybe if you have time you could give us more background on Danni or a problem that develops because of her past. Please continue with your story. You've got a really good style.

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by Anonymous12/22/07

Really excellent story line

This is a great story! Please continue it, I will read every chapter you write.

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by Anonymous08/11/10

please

please write more of this story love the peolpe in it and love your style of writing

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by Anonymous08/12/11

I really like these stories, I hope you continue them.

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by Anonymous10/10/11

please

Please give us more

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