All Comments on 'Wisps of The Earth'

and eerie all at once. A very enjoyable read, and a likable main character.

A short but great piece. Good pacing, sympathetic character/situation, nice narrative style and an intriguing story line - a wonderful Earth Day submission. I'll keep an eye out for your other stuff.

That sure was different. I think I'll go lay out in the yard for awhile and see if I get lucky. Good read Miss Lynn. Good luck in the competition.

DG

your mind is as fertile as the soil keep up the good work lynn

Very well done. Lovely take on Earth day. <Kiss>

and a wonderful story. Rich in imagery and sensuality. Great job, Lynn. Good luck in the contest.

Nicely written! It adds whole new levels to getting dirty....

Almost could have gone into first time *grin* I loved this idea. Nicely told!

Selena

Strong imagery, spun around an interesting idea. Well done, and good luck in the contest.

such lovely atmosphere. Very good writing and a lovely piece.

So beautiful, so sensitive, so real! You write so well...I envy you!

A nice way to bring the Earth god to please her.

A slap to people who say that character can't be rich in a short story.