All Comments on 'Jack and Julia'

This was a great first attempet. I really enjoyed it and the plot line was acctua;;y pretty belivable.

Good first story. Might add more detail about the mother and you could always add the other friends to make it even better? Keep writing....

This story was the hottest i've read in a long time. keep up the great work!!!!!

Good first story. Keep it up and you will keep us UP. Thanks for taking the time to write it!

Boy, would I have liked to of been broken in by such a lovely older woman. She could have taught me at an early age just how to fuck and eat pussy. I am older now and I don't know if I have been good at it or not. My wife had never been with another man so I am the only one ever to have eaten and fucked her so she has nothing to compare me to. She thinks it is just great and cums like crasy each and every time, but if I had had an older woman to teach me the correct way, I might be that much better.