by misanthrope75
Loved every minute of it please give us more from these characters can't wait to see it :)
Nice job. I was hard less than halfway through, and stayed that way till the end! I think all men like to believe they are the best lovers certain girls ever had, and the idea of making an ex cum with her new man in the room...excellant!
Write more.
That was hot! All Killer no Filler. You built up the tension masterfully and then the climax was fantastic. Can't wait to read more. Great job!
Totally loved this story. It reminded me of that song about the girlfriend calling her ex with the bf in the next room - except this is a little pornagraphic :)
That was hot. Sexy, Naughty and raunchy. Loved it.
Can't wait to read more!
love the story 11:11 fantastic story and brilliant writing
Oh, please write more like this, it's so hot I'm gonna have to read it many times! I totally loved it. x
Out-fucking-standing! I liked the pace of this story, and could identify wih how well the previous lovers know each other, and understand how to "push each other's buttons", to get the responses they want - sexually and otherwise. Most of us have (or had) someone like that in our lives. For sure I do.
Amazing story! This story gets me hot, and keeps me wet through the whole thing. I think most women can remember an ex who could do this to her. Part of it is the taboo nature of exhibitionism, and part of it is the rekindled lust of a former lover. This story brought back wonderful memories of an ex.... I would love to see more of this!
this was an awesome story...made me wet and really horny and the orgasm was awesome it reminded me of my ex he was so good on making me cum
the ex and her belong together two azzholes dont make a right but they deserve each other
Awesome story. Super hot. You just made me cum. (I'm female)
Nice story. Is there going to be any follow up to it? 12:12 perhaps? :)