All Comments on 'Rita's Bus Ride'

Loved this story, Erica! Brought back memories of fucking a school girl on a train once! Love all of your stories and would love fucking you someday as well! Keep up the great stories!

Just work on the typo's. The plots are great and definately hot. As for someone asking what you mean by thick, well they need to get out in the world. Tell him thick is what J-lo is below the belt. One of those asses that just beg to be taken.

Hot! Anal with a thick ass Latina..

I just loved the story. Especially the part where "Rita even adjusted herself so the person had full access to any area he wanted." Fucking hot.

I just wished there was no actual sex at the end. It would have been even more erotic if things just remained where this girl was groped and felt up leaving everyone (Rita, the bus riders, the story readers) something to imagine.

Great work though.

I like the first part of the story with the groping. I wish the story had stayed that way more erotic.

The title says it all.

It was a good read but was ruined by spelling and gramatical errors. In some placed there were alphabets missing or interchanged with others- like 'felt' became 'left.

It would have been more enjoyable if the author had payed more attention to the grammar and spellings.

Otherwise, it was a good story! :-)

Very sexy story. I share it with my friend & he fucked me hard. I enjoyed like never before. I moaned like a whore. His penis is big. I took it in mouth & then had anal sex as well.would like to read more such stories & getting fucked. Sometimes I do feel like being fucked in a bus.

Exciting . I too want to be fucked by u

I wanna be used like this

need more stories about Rita's bus rides

I would love to be used like this.

"Rita had just turned 18 so her parent let her start taking the metro bus to school alone."

Okay, i know rules, so you had to change in your story...

But... well... it just sounds stupid!