I hope that it was NOT as sick as the Title and Sub Title suggest
OMG! What a turkey of a story. Should not be under the incest section but the non-consent section.
It was written as if it were happening in a cabin in the hills of the South. I hope that is not the type of action we are expected to believe happens there.
Garbage you should never force sex on anyone ever
I would rather eat vomit than read this in it's entirity.
This story was such poorly written garbage, it made one of Mrs Thatcher's speeches sound proper and interesting!
Fucking hardcore. Nice.
All you other girly losers leaving comments about this story is too nasty can go back to your encounter sessions and cry about it.
Nothing described ever, action sequences less than a sentence long, no background, no personality, character reactions that not even the Silver Age comics would call psychologically reasonable..
The only way it could be worse would be if it was longer.
What crap! Like something a 12 year old pervert would write. Poor spelling, poor sentence structure, poor subject matter. Definitely belongs in the "non consent" section. At the very least, try using spell.
It looks like the comments are mostly by the same person and I've seen them before on other writers. If you do't like a story why read it? Or at least just leave one comment. How about showing us your name so we can read your stories. But I doubt you are able to write more than a few four letter words and a X for your signature.
How did this get past the Lit. editorial people? I thought they had a semblance of high standards if only for some literary expertise. This shouln't be here amongst the great work of many other WRITERS.
Rape is Rape. You A--hole.
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