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by Selena_Kitt01/20/08

Powerful

This is a powerful piece - so subtle and yet stark in its telling. I'm impressed.

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by Anonymous01/23/11

I was there in my mind

I loved your excellent word pictures. I could visualize the diner as you described it and the action as it took place. That takes talent, in my opinion. Well done. Enjoyed it a lot.

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