All Comments on 'Amy's Ardent Boyfriend'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Thank You!!

You truly have a gift

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Wonderful Horny Story

Thank you, I have been disenchanted with erotic tales for a long time, came across this one by chance and totally loved it. Would enjoy more tales please...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
splash

beautifully written. lengthy and joyous jackoff session for me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Naughty Naughty Naughty

This is one of the hottest stories I have ever read. I was hard and so close all the way through. More Please! I return to this story over and over again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

I was turned on UNTIL Susan came into the story. What a cold,calculating, controling little BITCH she was. Why deny herself and her siblings from pleasure like that? I'm not into that at all. The story did have great potential until she came into it though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
GREAT!!!!!

This was one of the best stories I've read in a long time. Your a total genius at writing. I was practically on the edge of my seat the whole time and had a hard on to go with it. It completely drew me in to the story. PLEASE!!! write more stories about Rick and his sisters. I wanna hear more about Rick and them. THANK YOU for your writing.

SiimpleSiimplealmost 15 years ago
fun

This was so fun to read. I wasn't sure how it would end or where it was going but I enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
ruined

susan ruined the story rick should have ripped her clothes off pushed her down and started fucking her while sandy sat on her face making her eat her out they are just a couple of pussy whipped whimps

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Dan loved it

just a suggestion for the sequel(I hope you write)have Susan admit to planning the whole scene while in the bathroom with her sister. ps great story

fuzzyfrogfuzzyfrogabout 13 years ago
Very erotic,

Such a nice story, I love to tease for as long as possible also before I cum.

When I do it's usually more hot sweet thick cum than normal

Please write more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
nice write up

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
omg..............hot!!!!!!

That was such a hot sexy story!!!!!!! I was totally wet from the start, and had to put a towel on the seat because I was so sloppy from playing.......

Please.............more stories!!

I also liked it best before Susan came on the scene...just Rick and Sandy teasing and talking was sooooo damn hot!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
That was the hottest story I think I've ever read!

I've read almost every story on literotica since the beginning but I don't think I've ever come across anything this good. Amazing work.

rajg_2001rajg_2001about 12 years ago
my sister

My sister read yr story and asked me to read it also on her computer. After reading it i felt bold and started kissing my sister the first time and this led to fucking her for the first time. Even though we r married v wl do it whenever we get privacy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Hypocrit to the Max

What a hypocritical little bitch that Susan is! She should be the first one to actually get fucked in a sequel, while Sandy watches, and maybe gets licked by Rick. Question: Why did Rick call Susan, Sandy when she came? Does he secretly like her more?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
confused

why is it called "AMY'S ARDENT BOYFRIEND" if it's not about amy??? WRONG TITLE DELETE AND REDO AND USE YOUR HEAD THIS TIME.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
amazing orgasm

OMG i was only half way through ur story when i had the most amazing orgasm of my life.. It usually takes me two stories to cum.. Ur did it in half.. Well done

curiousboutwomencuriousboutwomenover 11 years ago
GREAT!!!!

Loved it. Write more

horneyfox69horneyfox69over 10 years ago

Great story, I really liked how you led us into it, and then dropped the orgasm on us. I like sibling sex more than child/parent

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
BS

This crap should be in the BDSM thread. Not erotic at all!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Response to BS / BDSM idiot

GTFO you A-hole. Who died and made you the F...ing category police?

OldeSarge1OldeSarge1about 10 years ago
Amusing

I can't help but notice that most of the anonymous comments seem to come from female readers. To cut through all the BS, I think it's a hot story and I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next. I'm not going to say what I think should happen. I'm just interested in what the author throws out there. Done fine by my thinking so far.

prop69prop69about 10 years ago
Fantastic story

Not only kept me hard, but in suspense. Where you going to masturbate, blowjob, eat her pussy, fuck or what.

Hope this is not the only story or time.

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 9 years ago
artfully, twisted tenderness

Elegant words fueling ardent actions (and vice-versa).

krazicat99krazicat99over 9 years ago
WOW

More, I need more. Great story, well written. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Brother and little sister should have stripped big sister, pinned her down on the bed and little sister should have gotten off grinding her hot pussy into her sisters mouth while brother fucked the hell out of his uppity controlling sister ;). She would have put up the required token resistance, ten seconds or so, before starting to cum like a freight train! ...sounds like brother needs to invest a good portion of his income on condoms to keep two sisters happy and sleepy!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
squirting

squirting has been studied. conclusion by testing is, it's urine PERIOD

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I've read this story 3 time today and it makes me so hot, I love it. Wish there was more

taco1085taco1085about 8 years ago
wow

this is amazingly hot.... cant wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

I have to admit I have read this 6 times and I still get turned on and very wet

Great story can't wait for more

prop69prop69over 7 years ago
I agree. Each time I read it I get hard

Hard and horny...Please TELL ME MORE

GradStudentGradStudentover 7 years ago
Only incest story tha has turned me on

Great job on charter and buildup.

topleaseustopleaseusover 6 years ago
HOLY SHIT!

Dude.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Gross

Stahp it

dowagerempressdowagerempressabout 5 years ago
too too hot

perfectly paced, beautifully written

Gregory079Gregory079almost 4 years ago
YES

This is how stories should be. 😍

morningfun1974morningfun1974almost 4 years ago
sweet

Very nice story well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nice premise

And pretty well done.

LegallySaneLegallySanealmost 2 years ago

Quit reading the middle of page 2. Suzy, the dominating bitch. What sex? There was none. One of the worst stories on Lit.

LaurawkLaurawkover 1 year ago

Love this. The quick journey of discovery that we all want in the real world but very few get. Love it

ChulenanChulenanover 1 year ago

Dude, the ebb and flow you created between Rick and Sandy easily got me off before Susan came into the room. Susan's dominance control was a surprise. It would have been cool for either girl to restrain Rick's hands, while teasing his nipples to drive him even closer to the edge of orgasm. A more detailed description of clit quadrants controlled stimulation could have been quite interesting, sexy and hot to read about. Overall, you wrote a very hot incestuous story. Good Job!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I wish I could rate this story a 15!! One of, if not the best I have ever read on Literotica! I would love to read another story with these three, the buildup was perfect! I'm going to check out more of your writings now! GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!

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