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Southern Nights Ch. 12

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by Anonymous02/12/08

Continues to be an amazing tale

I (and I'm sure many other of your fans) would LOVE it if a "burster" element was added to the pussy worship! It would definitely complement the wonderful face sitting and oral subservience...

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by Anonymous02/22/08

The Author Returns

The occasional visit to this site to see if either of my two favorite erotic writers has submitted something new has finally paid off. I must re-acquaint myself now with little Linda and her companions. This chapter is shorter than the others. That could be because the author took greater pains this time in writing the non-erotic descriptive passages. A tropical paradise is often too much for any writer to ignore. I especially liked the final passage with Linda uneasily contemplating the mighty Maracalor.
One looks forward to more.

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