All Comments on 'Today at the Beach'

There are some images in this poem that sweep me away to the water's edge in spite of the far too prosey feel of the opening. I reread and found more, this is a verse that keeps on giving. Thanks for sharing.

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I agree with champagne, however, I kind of liked the lilting story feel; it added to the mood, intensifying the image for me. Nice. I enjoyed, thank you.

Very solid vivid imagery. Also concur with champagne's thoughts on the somewhat prosey opening; it slows down the development, but is a small point.