All Comments on 'Irreconcilable Differences'

I am amazed to be the first to comment, its a good story, a little lite on sex for an erotica site though. I enjoyed rereading it. I can't remember where I first read it.

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It does need some careful editing and there are some awkward phrases scattered about.

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<I>-- srgeek --</I>

Twelve pages of long, methodical build up, and then a sudden ending that feels like you just decided it was time to quit. The bad guy dies of mysterious means leaving the widow without the income source so frequently cited as the reason certain actions taken during the investigation. The complicit secretary is murdered without any investigation or determination whether the videos had been sold or posted on the internet. There was no follow through regarding the behavior by or to the underage stepdaughter or her stepmother. No discussion of why the PI had been compelled to be celibate. And finally, nothing about an ongoing relationship between the two main characters.

All in all a very unsatisfactory and abrupt end. You could not call it a conclusion.

Ok story...good character development and plot...but you fell off the cliff st the ending...too briefly and devoid of details....did you simply tire of the story!

This was a wonderfully written story, with meticulous attention to detail.... The end should be better worked out, thank you so much

A well written story that held me all the way through

I really liked the story but right near the end you made an error. You had him rush back and put the tapes back in the locker. Then you had him and the lawyer bring them in to the sheriff's office. Which was it?

I didn't realize there is a height to hair length ratio, is it for everyone or just women? "brown hair cut a little too short for her height", what the hell does that mean? LOL

Otherwise not bad

Anonymous 2 years ago missed reading comprehension. I found NO holes in this one; totally on to of his game.

Jumped here from Page One. You are in the 90+ percent of LW writers that screw up discreet by typing discrete, which is an entirely different word. Damn. JPB