All Comments on 'Geek Lust'

Simple and to the point. Thanks, PW

Cute little story about two imperfect people. Not too many of those around here at Lit. Keep writing!

Not a dramatic, overwrought telling, just a nice, organic story. Probably quite accurate, too.<p>Nice read!

Makes me wish that I had held onto my "geekiness" for a couple more years. Sweet and romantic. So not like my first time. Great read!!!

Thanks for telling a sweet and realistic tale of young love. You helped us get to know the couple and paint the scene before getting to the fun. Keep writing!

I think you nailed this. Good chemistry between the characters, nothing seemed forced, and you appealed to my own geekiness with having them watch BSG.

watch BSG and other sci-fi stuff? So does it mean I can't be hot AND geeky? Wonder when they all will find Earth. lol This is a great short story!

Like many readers (I'm sure), we read and leave no comments. Try not to let this discourage you. Please keep on writing as we do enjoy your work.

I definitely enjoyed this story.

Very rarely do I expect a story on here to make me SMILE like I am now; perfectly done, and very real.

Excellent story! I really liked the characters. I would have liked to see maybe a little more explanation of their emotional relationship before this date. It seemed like it went from "theyre nerdy, go to school together, have the same interests" to having sex. But thats just an opinion and worth what you can get somebody to pay for it. This has been one of the most enjoyable stories Ive read here in a while. Thanks!

a pleasure to read!

Nicely written and you remebered that as they have both watched porn they understand the machanics of the act. I liked that they were shy and unsure but as I said I wish my first time had been as tender.

Great read!

First of all, geeks ain't smart enuf to think about condoms, and then when condoms are used in a fantasy story such as this, they ruin the story. And the parents are gone for the weekend? Come on now!

You need to go back and learn a few things about human behavior, intelligence amongst geeks, and hormones, and then come back and write a story such as this.

I thought this was lovely-- sweet, shy, sexy. And realistic! Thank you for posting it.

Everything seemed to move quickly enough without being too forced. And ignore Don's comment, I'm pretty sure you can just skip anything that begins with "geeks ain't smart enuf" because it clearly won't be meaningful. Anyway, keep up the great work!

True Love. :O)

Only comment i have is to maybe make her first time a bit more realistic at first

Yeah, sure... Most virgins manage simultaneous orgasms the first time they have sex.