All Comments on 'Sex on the Stairs'

by ellabee

Sort by:
  • 4 Comments
epiphany65epiphany65almost 16 years ago
Mmmmm...

Your writing keeps getting better and more erotic. Please, type faster. I can't wait for your next submission.

yellowhair69yellowhair69almost 16 years ago
Wonderfully erotic

A wonderful story by a great story teller. Hurry up and write some more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Confusing

Are they on the stairs? then how could he take her in his arms and they drift to sleep?

and if he just "deflowered" her a few weeks before, how likely is it that they would have seriously fooled around with anal? or does that not count in deflowering?

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous