by AnalAnnie19
Dear AnalAnnie19, the jest of your story was excellent the whole idea and the scene conjured up left many questions, was this all a daydream at work, a dream at night or an actual occurence that took place. The running on of thoughts to begin with found confusing and hard to follow,when posting on the internet or in this type of format break them up a bit more so that they are easier to follow. Thank You for sharing this story and I hope you write more for good ideas can become stunning rewards for others.
Fantastic read, Annie. BTW, can't wait for the next installment of your story with you and Jenny. ;)
I liked this a lot. You found a way round the usual porn cliches. Great style. The office headlines device is clever. I also liked your/the narrator's insecurity early on: it's funny but real as well. And my favourite line was: 'She's fucking me from behind – in the behind.' Funny, cute and sexy. I hope your behind gets plenty more of the same. And I'd like to see more of your writing too. - jimmy
Right on the button Annie, different from, but just as good as your earlier tales. Beautifully done - loved it. Going to go away and put something up my bum and masturbate now, probably to Annie's First Love.
OMG, this is absolutely wonderful! Erotic and tender, lusty and loving. You hit it right on the head, girl! I can't wait to read more.
What a great story, so well written. I think this is the shortest story to ever make cum. I love your other stories as well, keep them coming!
Annie is such a positive writer. If U ever want to be left with a warm and Happy feeling - read Annie. If U ever want Ur Pussy to be left with a Warm & Happy feeling - read Annie.
Love & Kisses,
Betty18
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Very exciting and well written! I orgasmed while reading your story. Thank you!
This is such a beautifully crafted story! I love the way you modulate from the opening stream-of-consciousness to more conventional prose narrative...as well as the erotic power that comes across throughout. And the "orgasm for my soul" at the end: perfect!