All Comments on 'Dirty Little Kitten'

angel not angle.

spell check my friend.

ok. read

where do you reside? is it me, violet?

Your story jumps from points of view too much. Either you are telling the story from your point of view, so use I, me, mine or your telling it from a third person so use he, his. I know you can't be a huge grammar Nazi on this site, but you asked for feed back and that was a glaring issue with this story.

I thought this was brilliant. I was desperate to read more! Wow. I was hoping that briefcase would be full of sex toys!