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KillerRomanceKillerRomanceover 15 years ago
silent sea

"unto the silent sea the cup

is emptied by the sparkling tide

and filled with shattered melting

fragments

of our tears

and of our pride"

Those last few lines got to me. Sadness, perhaps, and foolishness and longing. Loved it. <3 Lillian, KR.

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