All Comments on 'Camping Weekend'

A very believable story, almost like a chronicle, rather than a diary. Non the less I think that the author should tell us what happened on the following nights, and maybe after the trip was over, there might even have been another tete-a-tete between the wife and friend....Rich

and a husband that gets off watching his loved one have sex. How original.

Well written example of one of my blue-ribbon fantasies. Thanks, and please keep writing - perhaps a sequel? Pieater

Disregard the comment by 'Just another woman...' Studies reveal that such comments are made by a man with a small penis. Chances are someone is long-stroking his wife, and he's noticed that she's not nearly as tight as she once was. He may also be doing more of his laundry by hand, and of course that's not nearly as enjoyable.

I'd definitely disregard the sarky anon. Moralizing on a sex site is supremely ironic but then the stupid ones always expose their inability to see the irony in their commentary.<br><br>

Nice, hot story!

Hi asexyiris:

Good job.

You skillfully brought the 3 characterd into an out-of-ordinary situation where the improbable became the order of the day.

There is a lot of UNDERSTATED EROTICISM in your story. E.g. when the wife tells the the husband that "John's erection was exciting her (&) she would love to feel (John's) penis inside her with (husband) aware, but silent." Altough the eroticism is understated, that moment is pivotal for the story: that's the moment where the synergy of sex & love sends the married couple to cloud number nine. They are in it together!

There is no ch. 2 that i know of which i think is fine because this story is very good as is. We the readers know all we have to know: next morning they woke up to a beautiful day and they will spend another night in the tent!

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