by ialoveayoua2a
Hey there, you're doing great that is a great story, keep up the good work, let us know what else they do how does it keep going,,,
I love the story. Bu it feels like you're rushing through the good bits. slow down and give us some description
Loved reading this story. It is great. I hope you will post another part to it soon.
Loved reading this story. It is great. I hope you will post another part to it soon.
Short but sweet, well written.
Checked your Bio, if that's your picture, you are a very beautiful young woman, I wish it wasn't so dark.