by Reindeer58
No sex in 2 chapters and I'm hard as a brick reading it. I'm really gonna enjoy this series. Thanks for starting it.
this is the best story I have read this year. Thanks.Keep it comming
John
I have been waiting so long for such a story !
And so well written.
Keep it going !
The way the dialogue flows makes me want to die. I assume it probably gets better as the story progresses but I don't want to risk investing any more time in this story.
God the dynamic is really weird, I hope we get some explanation as to why the parents are so... Hmmm with their children. Its interesting amusing, but i hope it's justified
I agree with the last comments. The dialogue and the flow was weird, especially in the first chapter. I'm not sure if I want to follow it further or not.