by Safe_Bet
I doubt that you'll get many votes from Miami fans, but it was one HOT story!
too bad it was so short, it would have been nice to have a longer story with more detail. Fantastic concept.
Nice work Safe it was a hot story.
But who doesnt love cheerleaders
Once upon a time (2006 maybe) you wrote wonderful stories ms. kittyn/kitt. Then you entered the SURVIVOR CONTEST and you've struggled ever since. It's so sad. I know it hasn't always been easy for you with all the time you spent in jail and everything but still! 1000 word stories! From a one time master.**** And every lesbo should know that PLASTIC is out - Duh, have you heard of the environment? You rich San Diego Lesbian Republicans are all the same. You think you're better that all the other lesbians out there. Vanilla Lesbians we call your sort from where I come from....Gabby
Well written story that was very funny. If only those that were being made fun of would understand.. or not.
Don't usually read Lesbian stories. Just not my choice. I read this because of info on the threads. I kind of liked it. Good luck in the contest.
DG Hear
Clever approach to a V-Day story...seems like no one on either squad really lost... and some were found.
...Cuz you all sure don’t know your American football ma’am. Nothing in the world an American cheerleader likes more than that piece of meat hanging between the QBs legs. And if the QB ain’t available there’s always the RBs or the CBs or the DEs or the LBs or the… well I think you get my meaning little lady…***** Cock and Cheerleader go together better than Ice Cream and Apple Pie! Those little beauties (and you have to be a pert, sassy, sexy young thing if you want to be a cheerleader in the good old U.S. of A. my dear) start learning to toss the baton in junior high. And by the time they’ve graduated to High School, then College, and then finally the Pros the girls that are left standing are the best cocksuckers in the land!
I started reading this because of the title. You're probably too young, but there was a television show called Flipper, about a Dolphin.
I didn't realize this was a parody about someone from the board.
Good luck in the contest.
All your author mates seem to find this an hilarious in joke. Not being one of that hallowed group I uhought it was neither amusing or erotic, and the plaudits for each others work in the clique seems well orchestrated. I hope someone original wins the contest, and have been harsh in my voting to try to balance your mates votes.
Peep would probably prefer this under the humour listing, but either way I laughed pretty hard. good job.
that you've got nothing better to do than churn out crap like this and pick on people who never bothered you before you started poking at them. Is this something that would make your children proud? Something to think about.
Loved it from the title to the irrelevant reference to Val Day. The naysayers will be saying you're a man soon - not just English! Satire isn't dead - good luck.
...is, "scouries," if I'm giving this story a "0," then your ignorant, chauvinist comment deserves a negative 100. Fuck off.
It was pretty good, and funny, but not really that erotic. The sex part was just over too quickly. Good luck in the contest.
interesting story... i suppose there is something behind it i don't quite get, then again i always find things i don't understand interesting...
... as needle dicks and inflatables definitely don't match. Loved it.
Yuck. This is like low-grade porn. Sorry. And this was submitted for a contest?
No matter what some people say I really enjoyed reading this story. Please keep on writing this type of story.
More please,I think I am slowly realising why Americans have this obsession with cheerleaders,We brits dont have them to the same degree yet,but its growing
Could have been a GREAT story but was so short I thought this was a Precis or an outline. Very interesting but very interesting... I wish could "accintally" walk into a locker room with two full cheerleading teams in a full on, mass Lesbian Orgy. All those lovely 18+ year old firm bodies with lots of jiggly bits. OMG!, all those sweet juicy holes and mouths waiting to be tapped. It would kill me but Those Valkyies would send me to Valhalla! What a way to go!!.