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Yeah Drae!
Semi good guys ONE and evil bad guys ZERO! Now what is the girl going to do to the hero? Love the story, it is a joy to read.
great update
that was jam packed full of action, but the vital question is how r things going to move forward for our dear hero and heroine! can't wait for the next chapter. You're a super writer!!
love it...
can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
How could you do this to us????? SO SHORT!!! NOT FAIR!!! I'm dying here. Okay, okay, maybe I'm just being over dramatic, but really it's just too short. It's a tease. Sniff! Have mercy on our mortal souls and spare us our agony. Longer! I begged of you! SOOOOOOOOO Godd this chapter!!!!
Where's the rest?
NO!!!!!!! I was just getting into it and I was cut off! Left dangling!!!!!
I know this is only a story but I'm glad Nadia has turned out to be such a strong woman.
PLEASE, PLEASE PLEASE don't let us have to wait too long for the next instalment!!!!
WONDERFUL
I accidentally came across your story and I am so glad I did. Once I started reading I couldn't stop till I had every chapter read. I can't wait for the next chapter! Wonderful story!!
Love this story, can't wait for the next chapter.
OH, LORD!
I'm like a junkie waiting for my next fix of this story. Please don't leave me this way :)
I think I'm sick
I've just read the whole nine chapters AGAIN. I must be sick. Suffering from re-readanoia or something. BUT IT'S JUST TOOO GOOD! Can't wait for the next one :)
More Please?!
I've read and re-read them all....and I still can't get enough! Please end the torment of your poor readers. We can't wait for an update!
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EVERY CHAPTER GETS BETTER AND BETTER!!!!!! Thank youuuuuu!!! :D
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