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The Order Ch. 08

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/22/09

Yeah Drae!

Semi good guys ONE and evil bad guys ZERO! Now what is the girl going to do to the hero? Love the story, it is a joy to read.

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by Anonymous01/22/09

great update

that was jam packed full of action, but the vital question is how r things going to move forward for our dear hero and heroine! can't wait for the next chapter. You're a super writer!!

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by punkin107701/22/09

love it...

can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

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by Anonymous01/22/09

NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

How could you do this to us????? SO SHORT!!! NOT FAIR!!! I'm dying here. Okay, okay, maybe I'm just being over dramatic, but really it's just too short. It's a tease. Sniff! Have mercy on our mortal souls and spare us our agony. Longer! I begged of you! SOOOOOOOOO Godd this chapter!!!!

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by caribbeanisland01/22/09

Where's the rest?

NO!!!!!!! I was just getting into it and I was cut off! Left dangling!!!!!

I know this is only a story but I'm glad Nadia has turned out to be such a strong woman.

PLEASE, PLEASE PLEASE don't let us have to wait too long for the next instalment!!!!

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by jen8001/22/09

WONDERFUL

I accidentally came across your story and I am so glad I did. Once I started reading I couldn't stop till I had every chapter read. I can't wait for the next chapter! Wonderful story!!

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by jlly1601/23/09

Love this story, can't wait for the next chapter.

OH, LORD!
I'm like a junkie waiting for my next fix of this story. Please don't leave me this way :)

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by KillerRomance01/25/09

I think I'm sick

I've just read the whole nine chapters AGAIN. I must be sick. Suffering from re-readanoia or something. BUT IT'S JUST TOOO GOOD! Can't wait for the next one :)

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by Anonymous01/30/09

More Please?!

I've read and re-read them all....and I still can't get enough! Please end the torment of your poor readers. We can't wait for an update!

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by Always_want_more04/13/11

!!!!!!!!

EVERY CHAPTER GETS BETTER AND BETTER!!!!!! Thank youuuuuu!!! :D

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