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The Word for Hunger Sounds Like Femme

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by bluebell702/08/09

Tidy and excellent

An enjoyable read. Didn't quite get there with it at first, but have re-read it a few times and find it to be very good. I especially love the first line of the fourth stanza (and the fourth stanza in general). Great title. This poem was actually mentioned (a bit briefly) in Saturday's New Poem Reviews. Thank you for sharing!

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