All Comments on 'Girl Across the Hall'

Love the way you combine the psychological aspect of sex within the story. It makes it soo much hotter. I look forward to your future writings. Keep us all wet and hard.

You have areal talent. Keep up the good work.

Very well done. The description of the inner thoughts along with the action was excellently done.

This is really offensive to this actual lesbian, and it should be offensive to straight women as well, as if sexual orientation can be turned on and off by a beautiful person.

And you're right, eating pussy IS the most natural thing in the world for girls to do. Keep converting them!!

If you were going for shit porn plot, you succeeded marvelously.

I've loved this one for so long (along with "Brianna" and the sadly-deleted "Striptease Seduction"), it's always a pleasure to read, whether it's here or in my private collection.

My only question is why it's taken our narrator two years to turn her friend lesbian? Don't keep all that sweet Kala-pussy for yourself, girl!

But seriously, hope there's more stories still to come.

Love the idea hate the writing this person writes stories as bad as I would disappointing keep trying lesbian story are hot best friend caught masturbating hotest story line ever 3 out of 5

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