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Voices so Sweet

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by Anonymous

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by bflagsst02/25/09

this poem definitely works as spoken

I wouldn't have liked it as much had I just read it. Good work.

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by Tzara02/25/09

I think this is a particularly good rondeau.

It's a difficult form because it requires a kind of simplicity of observation that avoids being cloying. I think you've done this very well, just reading it. Your narration only makes it better. I quite liked it.

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by annaswirls02/25/09

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Just wanted to say "How lovely" and Congratulations!

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by Tristesse204/16/09

Lovely!

I just got my sound card re-installed and I found this, it is a real treat.

Tess

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