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this poem definitely works as spoken
I wouldn't have liked it as much had I just read it. Good work.
I think this is a particularly good rondeau.
It's a difficult form because it requires a kind of simplicity of observation that avoids being cloying. I think you've done this very well, just reading it. Your narration only makes it better. I quite liked it.
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Just wanted to say "How lovely" and Congratulations!
Lovely!
I just got my sound card re-installed and I found this, it is a real treat.
Tess
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