All Comments on 'Mardi Gras'

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Epmd607Epmd607about 15 years ago
first stanza

is excellent, different letters to break up the monotony. this is the best of this sort that I've read from you. But in the next couple stanzas you keep hitting the one note. I think allit works best when you use different letters within the same stanza if not line. I kept my L poem short for that reason.

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