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All Comments on 'The Patient Feigns Regret'

by greenmountaineer

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bflagsstbflagsstabout 15 years ago
brilliant

I loved this. The only thing I'd recommend is changing "whiney" to "country".

bluebellbluebellabout 15 years ago
Very good

100 for the tea leaves on the teeth, alone. A sturdy little piece, simple but oblique and interesting. Also mentioned in today's poetry reviews. I'm glad you keep submitting!

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