by sassy_kitten
You definitey need an editor to proofread your stories, there were several obvious errors that distracted me from the story. (( getting his PhD, but he DID remember any of his peers having an ass that tight and tits so large on such a petite frame.)) I'm sure you meant to say didn't, but simple errrors like this can turn a reader off quickly
Teachers dominating students are always a hot story line. we definitely need more chapters from you in this story line.
The other comment "needs an editor". If that reader was distracted from the story by an accidental "did" instead of a "didn't", then God help him when the remainder of the world isn't perfect.
I very much enjoyed this fun and sexy story; it's an enjoyable proposition, a girl whoring herself for a grade. I also agree that the poster complaining about grammar is wasting his or her time reading stories on Literotica.
Keep up the great work!
Find someone who can spell and has a basic grasp of English grammar to edit your stories before you publish. This was unreadable.