All Comments on 'Kidnapping You'

I liked it, think you did a wonderful job, especialy if your not comfortable with writting this way.

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That was beautiful. It reminded me so much of me and my girlfriend! A lot of the things the narrator was thinking the whole time are the exact thoughts that I have... it's almost scary how much I related to this. I think I'm going to do this to my girlfriend and beautiful-girlfriend-nap her!

You did a superb job for someone who's not has a hard time working in first person and present tense. It was romantic, passionate, and oh so sexy. Easily one of my favorites. ;)

Nicely done!