All Comments on 'Express Lane Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
The Best...

I just love these two and i am glad that they finally were able to connect with each other. lets just hope that silver is out of the picture and fast. Also very HOT scene at the end. great work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
excellent update

Loved the update!! The sex scene at the end was HOT!!

hotcocoa6904hotcocoa6904over 14 years ago
OMFG!!!

That was sooo hot!! Noah is all kinds of sexy. I hope that they get it together and that Crystal won't be any trouble. Great update!! Glad to see that you are back.

pmpktypmpktyover 14 years ago
damn

I'm so in love with this series. I can't wait to read more. I love the characters well maybe not Jo but they are all so realistic. Awesome

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
hurry up!!!!!

please hurry up and update I've read this story more times than I can count

KiayhaKiayhaabout 14 years ago
Oh no.

There's no more. and no Rory. I'm really into their relationship and future. Invested almost. Great job!

PrincessErinPrincessErinabout 14 years ago
Wonderful

I truly love this story and as I've said before I love your writing.

Tierra22Tierra22over 13 years ago
ohhhh

Nasty I love it that was a great chapter lol

jeanyjeanyover 13 years ago
More!!!

Please tell me there's going to be another chapter!?!

got2luvmelgot2luvmelalmost 13 years ago
No Amount of $

Could make me willingly tie myself down with a cretin like Silver for any amount of time. The fact that she can't and refuses to stand his family, an innocent child no less, is enough for me to cringe.

I'm happy for Danni and James too, good for them. He was in my way anyhow, I want all Rissa's attention focused on Noah and Rory. Funny how he ended up with someone somewhat like his mother, at least in the children department.

I was literally screaming during that shower scene; don't know how she eventually resisted but I was happy when she did. I was even more ecstatic when they took it to the bedroom; Noah is a freak, can I have him PLEASE!?! I'm so in love with these two, if that's possible.

AMHJ89AMHJ89over 9 years ago

I wouldn't mind him turning down my bed

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