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Great first effort
wonderful first effort
very hot
very well done i consider myself a straight mmale but the way you describe it makesd me curious
Really great...
You should definitely continue writing!
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Thanks very much guys :) Im working on something else at the moment for exhibitionist/voyeur, so that'll be up soon. Really appreciate the feedback already left, and always appreciate constructive criticism!
Excellent!
Love the mix of exploration and voyeurism. Keep writing!
Great story
Reminds me of my first time . . . I was attacked in my "sleep" myself. Keep up the great work.
Great story
That was excellent dude.
Also, I
like reel big fish.
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