this is a very fitting end for her. When first married, along the way, and then by accident. Yeah right accident, maybe an accident as to who it was. She was very cold blooded in betraying herself, you, and the marriage. She felt nothing about exposing him to a variety of diseases she could and probably did acquire. A very fitting end actually. Ahthough I dont think I would have kept her there past the ending, maybe in the backyard of her lover with a small layer of dirt over her????????????
....though obvious.Could have been embroidered(as in the tell-tale heart)for better effect.Pistolpackinpete
Almost like a flash story but perfect ending and she deserved every part of it.
Very well written as is.
I rather enjoyed it.
Dead girls don't say no! Loved it!
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