by Ikay
Far too short and rushed. Looks like it was written by a 14 year old virgin who'd had a wet dream
You must be more careful with a two tongued mama. Otherwise it wasn't bad, though a bit rushed.
but missed the build up part of what she was good at and what he wanted to do to him. Should have included cock sucking but never the less, it was a good read and Mommy sounded delicious!
Not more of this stupid wrong spelling and word usage. The world uses mom, mother, momma, mommy, etc.; while:
mum = remain quiet/silent
mummy = is a dead body for science study
from US-centric respondents. The terms 'mum' and 'mummy' are far more common in the UK than the American 'mom'. Literotica is a .com site and therefore claims to be international. If it were to claim to be specifically a US site it shoulld be .co.us.
How old was his mom,or mum,how ever you want to say it isn't important, but more details of her is...What's her name,can she get pregnant, does she have any sex life with dad anymore, will he be able to dominate her and turn her into his slut? What happened after the first time he fucked her? Did she get up the next morning and feel embarrassed that she fucked her son, or was she like a yielding little girl to him, wanting his cock again?......You have a lot of story yet to tell, don't let a few assholes dissuade you from your story. Use the story to show your thoughts on incest, but keep love in the story. Thanks for the post.....Rich
I do not know what to say but this was bad. Try again. Good luck!!!!
The story had potential - but just didn't get there. Yes, this is an international site - just don't tell those from the USA - Mum's the word!
Not much of a plot, but that's the point. This was a short, arousing story to spank it to. I'm glad that this site has both short stories like this and longer tales to stimulate the mind.
"You're not as big as your father but already use it better" after our first time.