All Comments on 'I Knew Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
fantastic!!

Once again a fantastic chapter. thanks for getting another one out so fast!! I hope the next one is just as quick :) I loved it!!

catman71catman71over 14 years ago
slow and steady

like how you are going slow on the build-up, even though her moving in with him seems a little fast then its because she feels safe and thats is what is importwnt to the story, just do not rush the story it is going at a perfect pace( please some back story too)

Zodia195Zodia195over 14 years ago
Nicely Done

When someone goes through trauma like that, you have to go slow. I am enjoying this.

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