All Comments on 'How Big the Ocean?'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Rambling

Seems to drift without purpose, sorry.

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101over 14 years ago
Confusing?

Yes, rather, until I realized what the story was about. It was about a real Christian, rather than a professional member of the clergy.

Old_BlueOld_Blueover 14 years ago
Worth the second read.

I honestly had to read this one twice. I was glad I did. Thanks for a humanistic story and good luck in the contest.

_Lynn__Lynn_over 14 years ago
Great message . . .

Helping vs talking about it. Good luck in the contest.

elfin_odalisqueelfin_odalisqueover 14 years ago
And not a Santa anywhere

Nicely done: you write a good story. Good luck

driphoneydriphoneyover 14 years ago
Nice story and important message

Sorry I didn't get it read and voted on in time for the contest, but I ended up need the message today more than you can know. Thanks.

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Former SR71 pilot, currently professional writer and book editor; writes under name "habu" on other erotica sites. My erotica books can be found under the author name habu or Dirk Hessian (and coauthored books with Sabb under the names Shabbu or Stephen Kessel) at S...