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The Making of a Slut Ch. 01

byJust Plain Bob©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/16/09

Seriously?

So the Republican President screwed over the soldier that our tax dollars payed to train by sending him to do the job he was trained for? Leave the politics out of the porn.

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by Anonymous11/16/09

First commenter

It is a story moron. JPB isn't holding a gun to your head to read it. Move on Dumbass.

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by Anonymous11/16/09

i wish you left the soldier out of it

content sucked and you and your friends are on a dead course.fun is one thing,but fucking over a soldier in war is different.respect for something other than yourself.his whole unit will be after your buddy and i hope they cut your cocks off and put in your mouths.to me this was some cold shit to do to a soldier in war.

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by Anonymous11/16/09

J.P.B.

No thanks, to make this story work for me, you and your "friends" would need to die.

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by Anonymous11/16/09

Just another fucked up JPB story.

But he(JPB) is happy to please himself so he doesn't give shit if anyone likes it or not. As fpr the story? stupid wife stupid husband and all round arsehole and bastard non man who is somehow the centre of this story.

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by Anonymous11/16/09

So evil.

This is great. I love how evil this is.

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by dirtdigger195511/16/09

Good story.....

did not care for Rich much. Actually, Rich should die in the next chapter, but this might be the only one, hey JPB? Someone who does that to anyone serving in the military, Regular or National Guard, when you catch him, I'll lend a hand with the rope. Just bury him deep when you're done. Lot of hate here at the LIT, not much lovin', at all. Cheers

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by Anonymous11/16/09

Nice way to stir the pot jpb....

....I'd like to jump in and say what this true (Yankee) patriot thinks of people who allow themselves to be conscripted into fighting unjust and unwinnable wars that make this nation less safe but I'm bored with the preponderance of the "America, right or wrong" crowd so loud these days.I wish those imbeciles would read the words of Maj. Gen. Smedley Butler, America's most decorated Marine, but they'd probably paint him a traitor,even though he earned two more Congressional Medals of Honor than any of us.Thinking someone is noble simply because of their occupation is stupid and naive to the extreme but in this case I would agree that I hope Mike buttfucks him and kills him slowly when he comes home.Then again,knowing the author's stories, I wouldn't be surprised if Mike wanted this shit and just didn't have the depravity to initiate it himself.-pistolpackinpetedefendingourborderandnoth ingelse

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by Anonymous11/17/09

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by Anonymous11/17/09

this is a friend???

Without a doubt, this is the lowest from of friendship there could be. Ruining a friendship, a marriage and a woman? Who the fuck is this guy? Al-Quiada? So when hubby finds out (and he will thanks to every Tom, Harry and Dick fucking her) what do you think he will do to his so-called friends...I can imagine the PTSD will be an active defense.

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by Anonymous11/17/09

So Far

JPB, it ain't much of a story, but having read quite a bit of your other "stuff", I can't help but wonder where you are going to take this shit, so I'll stay around to see what you do, and whether or not I need to scrape some of your hide off about it.

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by lancewm11/17/09

It's a story folks

What's the matter with you idiots who act like you are commenting on real life. It's a well written fantasy, that's all. I don't condone the content. The story is about a sick fuck. So what.

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by Anonymous11/17/09

Lanceworm

of course it's a story, the real J.P.B. is a skinny little bitter man with a pot belly that writes good and bad stories, nothing in between, love em or hate em, he doesn't care. This one I hated, couldn't finish it, nothing good to say about it, but thats just me.

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by Anonymous11/17/09

Going by the percentages on this site

99.9% of american men are cucks, so hubby will love it when he finds out. And seeing as 99.9% of american women are sluts, what's to wonder? What a fuckin race. Be a great day when the Brits,Canadians, Aussies and South Africans turn on you, and you just won't know who your friends were. You're imploding, like all bullying empires before you. And please take that sad cunt GW66(a.k.a poizon69(!!)happy nappy man(?)and average writer(talk about over rating oneself))with you so he can't give out anymore of his traitorous spiel about his own race. Fucking dog.

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by Anonymous11/18/09

Re:"going by the percentages"....

....evil empire or not, America is a fucking COUNTRY,not a race you spineless anonymous pinhead.-pistolpackinpete

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by Anonymous11/18/09

this what happen when a barrel of worms are open

fanasy or real if you being in war this sucks.for men or women who think americans or cockkolds or wimps,just ask iran who surrendered to them.the brits did and are biggest cockolds in the world.

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by digdaddyrich11/18/09

well written, fast moving but not real to life

A good fantasy to have a sexy young woman at your call anytime and anyway. I do think the story is more on the lines of nonconsensual rather than loving wives. But that is yet to be seen. Maybe she will love all of the cock she will be getting. I do like the screen name of one of the comments though. "Fucking Dog" is a fantastic name. A lot of good comments for the chapter, I enjoy reading them as much as the stories sometimes. Thanks Bob for the good read

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by Anonymous11/18/09

Usual blackmail bullshit

To keep a clearly dishonest asshole from telling her husband that she fuck him, the payment is that she must fuck him more and more, which does nothing but compound what happened and increases the odds that hubbie WILL find out.

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by Anonymous11/20/09

You've done a lot better

A pretty disapponting story from you on all facets. You've done a lot better work in the past that's for sure.

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by Anonymous11/23/09

No Wonder

There is little or no doubt now why you write all of your wimp and cuckold stories. The guy in this a despicable bastard. Not only does he screw his friend over, he starts to turn his friend's trusting and naive wife into a slut. You have written some pretty bad shit in the past, but you are taking to an all time new low for even you. I assure you I won't bother reading the rest of this story.

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by agboni11/23/09

Very Good

A very well fiction work. Thanks.

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by Anonymous11/27/09

Bum

Wow that is some friend that Mike has to look after his wife. Also some other classy guys that go along with Rich to turn BJ into a slut while Mike is overseas. Rich also has plans to keep BJ slutting around when Mike comes back after his time of service over there for his country. I certainly hope that Rich and his friends get whats coming to them. As for BJ I am suprised that she just doesn't tell Rich off and not be blackmailed.Good story.

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